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Writer's Notes - November 2008



We Have a Great Deal Planned Today!

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Dream or Destiny: A prize worth winning
Sit down, relax, grab a cup of your favorite beverage, and join us for Lillie Ammann's second exciting stop at Writer's Notes, where you'll learn who won a copy of Dream or Destiny, read all about Lillie's road to publication, and ask this experienced author, who has published several books, all the pressing questions you've always wanted to ask about publishing your own work.


First Order of Business: Contest Winner

Drum roll, please! And, the lucky winner of an autographed copy of Dream or Destiny is...Mark Antony! Congratulations, Mark! I know you'll enjoy the book! Please e-mail me at writersnotes@gmail.com with your shipping info, which I'll pass on to Lillie so she can ship your book to you.

A big Thank You to all who participated in the drawing! I appreciate your comments and wish all of you could have won! Thanks, also, to those who commented without entering! It's always great to hear your thoughts!


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Next on the Agenda: My Exciting Interview With Lillie Ammann!

Without further ado, I present to you my interview with Lillie--a fascinating exhange in which this experienced author offers a wealth of interesting, helpful, and encouraging information for aspiring and practicing writers! Plan to give it a thorough reading--and make sure you check out the valuable resource links Lillie provides for your benefit!



WN: What writing and/or life experiences sparked the idea for Dream or Destiny?

LA: I saw a television documentary about a woman who uses her psychic dreams to help the police solve crimes. Her dreams are after the fact and are generally about such things as the location of the body rather than about the crime itself. However, that sparked my imagination. I wondered, “What if someone dreamed about a murder before it happened?”



WN: How detailed was your plot line when you began writing Dream or Destiny, and how did your plot unfold?

LA: I knew little about the plot when I started writing. Characters come first for me. The characters bounce around in my head for awhile before I have any idea of the plot. I knew Marilee would dream about a murder, and that’s about all I knew at first. I got to know Marilee, then David appeared. I hadn’t consciously planned to write about domestic violence, but when I was getting acquainted with David, a long history of abuse came to light. It’s probably more accurate to say the characters told me the story than to say I wrote the story. I didn’t know what was going to happen until they told me. In fact, I didn’t even know who the murderer was until the very end!



WN: Dream or Destiny tackles a sensitive topic: domestic violence. What challenges did you face in weaving this issue into your story and still creating realistic character development?

LA: As I said earlier, the characters really told me their story. One of the best compliments I have received came from Bluestocking at The Bluestocking Guide. She asked me if I had personal experience with domestic violence and said when she read the book, she felt sure it was written by someone who had either experienced abuse personally or was close to a victim of domestic violence. Bluestocking is an attorney and domestic violence victims’ advocate, so I was pleased that she said the characters were true to life, unlike what she normally finds in fiction.



WN: What techniques have you found effective for strengthening motivation when working on a book-length project such as Dream or Destiny?

LA: While I was writing Dream or Destiny, I belonged to a critique group. Each member was expected to bring a chapter for critique to each weekly meeting. Having that accountability was a powerful motivator. I didn’t want to show up without my chapter, and I couldn’t just not show up—the meeting was at my house. The group no longer meets so when I start my next novel, I am going to give myself deadlines. If accounting to myself isn’t enough, I’ll partner with another writer to be accountable to each other.



WN: The tension between raw creativity and literary polish often plagues writers. How did you achieve (and how would you recommend that other aspiring writers achieve) the balance needed for creating an inspired yet polished piece of writing?

LA: I learned in an online writing class that first drafts are supposed to be “pure green dreck.” I separate the raw creativity/the inspiration from the literary polish. The purpose of the first draft is to get to know the characters and find out what happens. The only editing I permit myself at that stage is primarily getting back into the story after a break. I re-read the last few paragraphs from the work of the last writing session, whether that was the previous day or weeks ago. I allow myself to make minor revisions in those paragraphs, then it’s back to “pure green dreck.”

The only time I would consider making major revisions during the first draft would be if I found myself completely off-track. That’s never happened, though. After the “pure green dreck” is poured out onto the pages of the manuscript, I like to put it aside for days or weeks. Then I go back to edit … and edit … and edit … and edit again. One way to look at it is you can’t polish a gem unless you have a gem to polish. That “pure green dreck” is the diamond-in-the-rough that you will turn into a stunning jewel.



WN: Tell us a bit about your road to publishing Dream or Destiny.

LA: It was a long road with so many twists and turns I couldn’t see the end until I was almost there. My road to publishing this book should encourage any other writer who is discouraged that their manuscript hasn’t sold. As I wrote in How Things Change—Editing a Manuscript Ten Years Later, “The road to publication for Dream or Destiny was a long one—more than ten years, in fact. For much of that time, publication seemed like a dream that, unlike Marilee’s nightmare, didn’t come true. Representation by an agent for two years resulted in nothing more than a stack of rejections. I put the manuscript away and tried to forget it, but the characters wouldn’t let me forget. They seemed to call out to me, demanding publication, claiming it as their destiny.”

Several times I put the manuscript away to gather virtual dust on my computer, only to have the characters clamor out again. I signed a contract with one publisher, then before Dream or Destiny went into production, the company decided to focus on publishing erotica. They released me from the contract because my book would not be a good fit. After some more virtual-dust-gathering, I sold the book to GASLight. However, there were delays as a result of health issues and other circumstances. Finally Dream or Destiny has come to the end of that long road and is now a reality.



WN: I understand that much of your experience has been with small press and self-publishing. What have you found to be the main advantages of each? Are there any disadvantages to these publishing methods that other authors should be aware of?

LA: Both self-publishing and publishing with small press allow the author much more input into the publishing process than is possible with major traditional publishers. Self-publishing gives the author total control, but not all writers are comfortable with the responsibilities and risks of self-publishing.

Small presses assume the responsibilities and risks but don’t offer as much control as self-publishing. Neither self-published nor small press-published books have the distribution of the large publishers. Writers will generally sell fewer copies of small- or self-published books, although they will earn significantly more on each sale.

In general, I think self-publishing is more viable for nonfiction than for fiction because it’s easier to find customers through niche marketing to people interested in the subject of the nonfiction book. I’ve written about the pros and cons of various kinds of publishing in my free Self-Publishing Primer.



WN: What advice would you give writers whose manuscripts are sitting around gathering dust and who feel they have little hope of getting them published?

LA: Re-read the manuscript yourself. If it’s been sitting around for awhile, it will be fresher than it was when you were working on it constantly. Ask yourself honestly if you still believe in this story. Do you like what you read … or would you quit reading if the book had been written by someone else? If you still love your story, ask for input from other writers or readers that you trust.

This is something else I’ve discussed in other blog stops, especially Getting Published with a Little Help from my Friends. If the readers like the story, submit it again …and again … and again. If the readers make suggestions for improvements, evaluate their suggestions and decide which you agree with and which you don’t. Revise, then start submitting again.



WN: Where can we go to read an excerpt from Dream or Destiny?

LA: You can download a free excerpt from Dream or Destiny in a PDF file on my Web site.



WN: Where can we purchase Dream or Destiny, and what formats are available?

LA: You can buy the book in paperback and e-book formats from the publisher, GASLight Publishing. If you order the e-book, you will download a zip file with several different electronic formats so you can choose the one you prefer. You can also order the book in paperback or Kindle edition from Amazon.com.



WN: I believe Dream or Destiny is your second published book. Would you mind sharing a little about your first book and your inspiration for it?

LA: Dream or Destiny is my second published novel, but my fourth published book. My first book, Look beyond Tomorrow: The Carola Spencer Story, told of the courage, faith, hope, and love exhibited by my friend and her employees after a double-murder/suicide at their workplace. I wrote the story to raise money for Carola’s medical expenses, and we donated the rest of the books to a literacy organization. I also wrote a nonfiction book on network marketing. Both are out of print now.

As is the case with many first-time writers, my first novel, Stroke of Luck, is autobiographical. The heroine has a stroke like the one I had. During my recovery, my husband had to care for me. I wondered how someone who did not have that support system would cope with devastating illness. That wondering led to Stroke of Luck.



WN: Where can we read an excerpt from Stroke of Luck, where may we purchase it, and what format(s) are available?

LA: You can read a free excerpt from Stroke of Luck on the publisher’s Web site. The book is available only as an e-book (a zip file with four different electronic formats) from GASLight Publishing.



WN: Tell us a little about your blog and what it has to offer writers seeking publication of their own work.

LA: A Writer’s Words, An Editor’s Eye covers writing, editing, and publishing; freelancing; and books and authors, along with occasional patriotic and Christian topics. I write about working on clients’ books as well as my own, and I’m planning to host several authors on blog book tours in the coming weeks. Writers will learn and be inspired by other writers’ stories. I also give practical advice on writing and publishing as well as related topics, such as rejection.



WN: Share with us, if you would, a few blog posts or series you’ve written that writers might find especially helpful in preparing and publishing their own work.

LA: Readers can go to my Series and Related Posts page and look through the categories. The most helpful posts in preparing and publishing your own work will be in the following categories: Critique and Other Groups, E-Books and E-Publishing, Editing, Life Lessons/Inspiration, Rejection, Self-Publishing/Publishing, and Writing and Self-Editing.



WN: What plans do you have for your next book?

LA: Characters for two different books are struggling for dominance in my brain right now. I know my next two books will be about secondary characters in Dream or Destiny. However, I’m not sure which of the books I’ll write first: Tess, “the crazy lady,” or Bonita, who was involved with a married man.



WN: Thanks so much, Lillie, for sharing your experiences with us and giving away a free, autographed copy of Dream or Destiny here at Writer's Notes today!

LA: I’m delighted to be here, Jeanne, and look forward to answering readers’ questions.

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Learn More at Lillie's Other Tour Stops

Be sure to visit the other stops on Lillie's tour and read her other fascinating interviews and guest posts. You'll find links to all of them on her Dream or Destiny tour schedule.


Have Your own Publishing Questions Answered Right Here: Leave a Comment for Lillie

Lillie is ready and willing to answer your questions about planning and writing your book, preparing your manuscript for publication, and doing exactly what it takes to get that book published and in print--with your byline on it! So, ask away! Bring your questions about all those small--or big--matters you've always been curious about and ask them with confidence of a writer who's been there. Leave a comment on this post, and Lillie will be happy to answer your questions.


Hope you've enjoyed this Writer's Notes interview with Lillie Ammann, author of Dream or Destiny. If reading Lillie's story has made you the least bit curious about her book, why not purchase a copy of Dream or Destiny at one of the above links. And be sure to invite everyone you know who enjoys a good mystery to visit this post, read my earlier review of Dream or Destiny, and get a copy of this entertaining book!


Enjoy!
Jeanne

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About Lillie:

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Lillie Ammann
Lillie Ammann does freelance writing and editing for authors, publishers, and business and nonprofit organizations. She is also Publisher and Editor-in-Chief of Your Information Center, a publisher of short, practical, free online guides on a variety of subjects.

As a freelancer, Lillie works with authors and publishers to prepare manuscripts for publication. She also writes and edits business documents and helps families and individuals compile family histories and memoirs. She especially enjoys helping self-publishing authors navigate the publishing maze and likes to think of herself as a book midwife. She can design the interior of the book, negotiate and contract with cover designers and printers, create and maintain the author’s website, and help with promotional activities, such as writing and distributing press releases. Lillie is as proud of the published book as the author is.

Source: Lillie's website

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Did you enjoy this post? Have anything to add? Any questions for Lillie? Perhaps reading Lillie's story has inspired you to write and/or publish your own book. What do you need to do to make that happen? What do you need to know to make it happen? Would it help you to get a bit of encouragement from one who's "been there"? If so, ask away! Lillie is waiting to give you the advice and encouragement you need to go for it and make your dreams of publication come true. Perhaps you'll find, after learning from Lillie's quest to publish Dream or Destiny, that publication of your own book is both your dream and your destiny!



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Dream or Destiny Book Review & Contest

November 10th 2008 16:00


My promised review of Lillie Ammann's novel, Dream or Destiny, follows. Be sure to leave a comment on this post sometime between now and midnight U.S. Pacific Standard Time on Thursday to enter our drawing for a free copy of the book! (The winner's copy will be shipped free-of-charge by Lillie.) Both U.S. and international readers are encouraged to enter.

Please feel free to leave a comment even if you don't want to be entered into the drawing (i.e., you already have the book or you're hosting one of the other stops on Lillie's tour). Simply mention that you prefer not to enter. We still value your comments--whether or not you enter the drawing!




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A Dream of Murder Comes True

A terrifying nightmare. A gruesome murder. And an eerie resemblance between the two. So begins Marilee Anderson's battle to uncover the truth about a crime that happened just as she'd dreamed it, making her everyone's favorite suspect.

Dream or Destiny, Lillie Ammann's tale of murder, mystery, and intrigue, opens on a moonlit night when the icy hands of fear shake Marilee awake. In the novel's opening scene, Lillie skillfully sets the mood, drawing the reader irresistibly into the tale, as it gradually begins to unfold.


Marilee Anderson trembled, her nightgown drenched with cold sweat. Moving only her eyes, she studied her surroundings. Moonlight crept through the cracks between the curtains and created strange shadows that moved on the floor like a flow of dark blood….

The drapes moved…(W)as someone in the room with her?...Pure terror turned her spine to ice. What had woken her? Strange images superimposed themselves over the disturbing distortions of her bedroom. A figure in black, stealthily creeping down a hallway, bursts of flame from the muzzle of a gun held in a gloved hand, a river of blood, and the smell of death….


Somewhere in the back of her consciousness, Marilee slowly recalls all the unsettling details of her nightmare and finally convinces herself that there's no one in the room with her, after all. A relief, yet still—


How could she have dreamed such horror?


A Pair of Suspects Turn Investigators

As Marilee ponders the horror of that nightmare, she realizes that she recognized the victim but can recall the dream murderer only as a dark, shadowy figure whose face she can't make out. And when she learns that the real-life murder has happened exactly as the murder in her dream had, she doesn't know what to think.

Lillie Ammann has turned this fascinating premise into an intriguing tale in which a highly intuitive, professionally competent, yet personally somewhat less-than secure Marilee must team up with the victim's brother, David Nichols, to uncover the truth about his sister's death. As the cop on the case, Detective Garcia, becomes more and more convinced that one or both of them are responsible for the murder, and as David's impatience to find his sister's killer grows, the two decide to do a little investigating of their own.


A Colorful Cast of Characters

Lillie Ammann has created a fascinating cast of characters in Dream or Destiny—from Marilee and David, who must learn to trust one another, despite the very real deficiencies of their own past relationships, as they work together to catch a murderer; to Tess the "crazy" lady, who somehow seems to know far more than she should about her neighbors. From Jason Tremont, Marilee's ex-boyfriend, who was dating Barbara Nichols at the time of her death; to George Welty, Barbara's rich but abusive ex-husband; and Henry Nichols, David and Barbara's religious-fanatic father, who always believed child abuse to be his God-given right—Lillie gives her readers a variety of multi-dimensional characters to either care about or despise.


A Look at Several Pressing Social Problems

Through its myriad twists and turns—of plot and phrase—Dream or Destiny offers the reader insightful glimpses into such serious social issues as child abuse, domestic violence, religious fanaticism, and other eccentric behaviors. It explores the psychological effects of grief, guilt, and regret, as it weaves its magic, steadily advancing toward its exciting climax. Along with the above issues, the novel touches on the critical importance of learning to trust—and love—after those closest to you have let you down.


A Balanced Look at Positive and Negative Religion

Along with its intriguing journey toward solving the story's mystery, Dream or Destiny is a book that provides a balanced and realistic view of the paradox that is religion, with the vastly different mindsets it can yield, contrasting the sickness of religious fanaticism with the healthy effects of genuine faith, which bears good fruit in the lives of those it touches, rather than filling them with ugliness and decay.


A Hopeful Book

And while Dream or Destiny doesn't claim to answer the question of why some of us must suffer--and sometimes even die--at the hands of our abusers, it does hold out the hope of healing for those who have survived it.


A Multi-Faceted Book

If you enjoy a good mystery that offers lots of colorful suspects, insightful commentary on some of the most pressing social issues of our day, and a realistic portrayal of the effects of true and false religion, you'll want to read Dream or Destiny.

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You may read an excerpt and/or purchase Dream or Destiny at GASLight Publishing.


Visit Lillie Ammann's blog, A Writer's Words, An Editor's Eye, to learn how you can write better and get your own work published.

There are still a few more stops on Lillie's virtual book tour. So be sure to check them out!



And don't forget to comment--between now and Thursday midnight U.S. PST--for your chance to win a copy of Dream or Destiny!

Please feel free to comment even if you choose not to enter the drawing. Simply mention that you prefer not to enter. We still value your comments--whether or not you enter the drawing!



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Marilee Anderson dreams about a murder and wakes to find it really happened. She and David Nichols, the victim’s brother, become the prime suspects. Though they have their secrets and aren’t sure they can trust each other, Marilee and David team up to find the killer....Will Marilee and David find the killer? Or will they end up in jail—or dead?

Excerpt from back cover, Dream or Destiny, by Lillie Ammann



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Mark Your Calendar! Two WN Stops on Dream or Destiny Book Tour Start Monday

One week from today--Monday, November 10th--Writer's Notes will host the first of Lillie Ammann's two WN stops on her blog book tour for her newly released mystery-romance novel, Dream or Destiny. Two of Lillie's last stops (during the final week of her tour) will be spent at Writer's Notes (the second will be Friday, November 14th, the tour's final day) where she will share details about her book, her experience with the publishing industry, and a free print copy of her book (which will go to one lucky Writer's Notes reader).

So, please stay tuned for Monday's post, and plan to leave a comment so you'll be entered into the drawing for the free book. (The winner will be announced in Friday's post.)


Monday, November 10th: My Dream or Destiny Book Review/Book Giveaway

Monday's post will contain my review of Dream or Destiny, and, as mentioned above, everyone who leaves a comment on that post between posting time Monday and midnight U.S. PST Thursday will be entered into the drawing for a free copy of the book. (Both U.S. and international readers are encouraged to enter.)


Friday, November 14th: Interview with Lillie/Open Question Forum/Book Contest Winner Announcement

In Friday's post, aside from announcing the lucky winner, I will interview Lillie about her book and her experiences with book publishing and will offer readers the opportunity to ask Lillie questions about the ins and outs of getting a book published. So, bring your questions about your own novel or other book and plan to ask Lillie everything you've always wanted to know about getting your book into print.

While Lillie doesn't claim to be an expert on every area of publishing, she does have considerable experience in certain areas of book publishing and she'd be more than happy to help with any questions she's able to answer to help you get that much closer to publishing your own book-length manuscript.


Last Chance to Win a Free Copy of Dream or Destiny

Don't miss these two stops at the end of Lillie's blog book tour--and don't pass up your opportunity to win a free copy of her suspenseful murder mystery, Dream or Destiny! Be sure to visit Writer's Notes between Monday, November 10th and Friday, November 14th to learn what Lillie's book is all about and enter the drawing, and on November 14th to read some fascinating info about Lillie, her book, and book publishing in general, to have your questions about publishing your own book answered, and to find out whether you will soon be reading your own complimentary copy of Dream or Destiny!


Hope to see you here!
Jeanne


Did you enjoy this post? Do you have a novel or other book-length manuscript of your own sitting around gathering dust? Have you all but given up on getting it published? Do you have questions about the publishing process? What fictional genres do you prefer to read--or write? Or do you prefer non-fiction? How would YOU like to win a copy of Dream or Destiny?



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October '08 Comment Recognition

I'm honored to once again recognize my valued readers who have left comments at Writer's Notes. To all the special people who have graced this little corner of the blogosphere with your wit and wisdom during the month of October, 2008, "Thank you!" You help to make this blog better! Special thanks, too, to those of you who commented here for the first time last month! You, too, are greatly appreciated!


Thanks, Everyone!

I appreciate all your thoughtful, wise, inspiring, informative, and incisive comments! Thanks so much for taking the time to read and share your thoughts, opinions, ideas, experiences, and support at Writer's Notes! I truly enjoy reading your insights, viewpoints, and perspectives! Thanks for making October another special month through your valuable input!


Sparser Posting Schedule = Fewer Commenters to Recognize

My apologies that my posting schedule, as well as my own visits and comments on the other blogs that I so enjoy, were quite sparse last month--which is why my comment recognition list is so short! Still, I appreciate each and every one of you who took the time to leave a comment--in fact, I appreciate you even more now than when I have a larger group! Blog comments are so motivating to a blogger! Thanks so much for your faithfulness!


October '08 Commenters

The following is a list (in no particular order) of all the fantastic folks who have left comments at Writer's Notes during October, 2008:


Ellen Weber, at Brain Leaders and Learners

Dan C. Rinnert, at dcrBlogs

Lillie Ammann, at A Writer's Words, An Editor's Eye

Brad Shorr, at Word Sell, Inc.

Karen Swim, at Words for Hire

Mark Antony, at Bloggers Quest

Moonglow, at How to Write

Wilson Pon, at TechnoStuffs

Cheryl Wright, at Cheryl Wright Writes

Joanne Fedler, at Secret Writers Business

Carolyn Cordon, at Light Within

Jarrah, at Back to the Eighties


I Truly Appreciate Your Comments!

Thank you so much, everyone, for making the Writer's Notes conversation so much richer during the past month by visiting and sharing your thoughts, insights, opinions, advice, and personal experiences with us! You add so much value to this blog, and for that, I thank you from the bottom of my heart!


Many, many thanks,
Jeanne


P.S. If you've commented at Writer's Notes during October, and I've somehow managed to overlook you, please be sure to let me know. I appreciate every single commenter, and I want to give each of you the recognition you deserve!



Did you enjoy this post? Have anything to add...any insights to share? I'd love to hear your thoughts! After all, your comments are what these monthly recognition posts are all about!



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